This would make a really cool visual novel! The setting is extremely creative! The courtly manner and politics really intrigues me and I would love to see more. The art you made is fantastic. You need many more characters drawn in the same way. With a little more polish, spell checking, and a host of similar characters this would make a very original and interesting game. Well done.

The setting is very cool! Nice job. It was interesting to play and quite engaging, despite being short.

This was an interesting introduction. Although I felt like my choices didn't really make a difference, that's how most introductions go. The art was great. The map images really helped to show how countries were located. the only things missing are spell/grammar checking and making sure that you don't use the menu feature to only give one choice.

Interesting setting, well presented apart from some spelling/grammar errors. The maps were a particularly nice touch!

Love the sense of intrigue & as others have said I'd really like to play this as a longer game! I've noticed on the Ren'Py forums that many folks get help from other forum members proofreading their games before release; maybe that would be useful to you in this project.