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    December 16th-19th 2011 :: Theme: Alone

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    foreveralone - ibnutri - Jam Entry

    Submitted Top down shooter with WASD and arrow button
    Nothing fancy here (it was supposed to be funny because the player's bullet
    should be spelled #foreverAlone), and everytime the boss die, it will say
    something that would be searchable from twitter.

    That was the idea, but the execution is failed. X(

    so now it only 3 level (yup) no kitten easter egg, no sound and music,
    even i forgot to make forever alone in pixel art XD.

    Sorry :(

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    Ratings

    #97Fun(Jam)2.21
    #138Humor(Jam)1.20
    #140Audio(Jam)1.10
    #147Innovation(Jam)1.57
    #159Overall(Jam)1.80
    #163Mood(Jam)1.15
    #164Graphics(Jam)1.53
    #167Theme(Jam)1.27
    #666Community1.60
    #685Coolness0%

    Comments

    Randomasta says ...
    Dec 21, 2011 @ 9:34am

    There needs to be a life indicator. Also sometimes 'enter' doesn't restart the game for some reason. And most importantly, I see no correlation with the theme XD

    Make A Game says ...
    Dec 23, 2011 @ 8:11pm

    I agree with Randomasta. I didn't know how much health I had until I died.

    galman says ...
    Dec 24, 2011 @ 11:31am

    Nice idea!
    Maybe try to do a remake for it.
    The overall idea is pretty good!

    joekinley says ...
    Dec 26, 2011 @ 7:46am

    Oh man, dunno what to say. For a jam entry, after 72 hours with 2 people and a game engine you managed to do that?

    The graphics are pretty non existant. Theme wise and mood wise, I can't see much here. There is no humor, no fun to play.

    The controls are annoying. As I can only walk horizontally OR vertically? Both would be much better. But even with these controls, managing to finish 3 levels was easy.

    Not impressed. This could be a simple prototype after, say, 5 hours of work. Could have put in much more effort on that one. I neither see any heart, nor any major effort in doing something.

    You didn't even blog about the progress, your pitfalls, or make a timelapse. That's sad.

    Hope you'll do better next time, and I don't wanna sound harsh here, but you could have done so much better. Even a post mortem with your learnings would be better because it helped people.

    Good luck next time.

    Jorjon says ...
    Jan 8, 2012 @ 9:57pm

    Good, but too short. I made it in 1 minute.

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